Chapter 2 Page 91

September 14th, 2008, 11:19 am

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Reply tRickityHouses, September 14th, 2008, 11:24 am

This page has way more talk to hopefully flesh out the characters some more. I kinda wanted to show that these two are pretty close and maybe add a layer of intrigue to them. Also it's important to create direction for the next scenes.

The art itself took me awhile to get it to look nice. I personally like khawn in panel two and the in middle panel the most. The last two panels are kinda weak.

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Reply 2 2 (Guest), September 19th, 2008, 11:18 pm

Typo in the bottom left speech bubble. Told you I should proofread for you =)

Reply Guest, September 22nd, 2008, 9:19 am

where!?!?

Reply tRickityHouses, September 22nd, 2008, 4:02 pm

Curses...

I mean... What mistake? you crazy

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