The 3rd

Chapter 1 Page 1

August 24th, 2006, 9:35 pm

Author's Comments:

Reply tRickityHouses, March 31st, 2018, 4:06 am

So after 10+ years I decided to update the font and dialogue a bit. Also larger page sizes and fixed paneling issues. Im going to try to keep the art relatively the same. Although there will be changes where appropriate.

I'll point out big changes for anyone interested.

This page has both Max and Khawn introduced but I've since removed Khawn's name drop. As it serves no purpose.

Reply Advertisement, May 26th, 2018, 2:43 pm

User's Comments:

Reply jhames34, August 25th, 2006, 3:51 pm

I have no Idea how to pronounce "Khawn" :p I like this page, good start...the first panel is the strongest, it looks really great

Reply tRickityHouses, August 25th, 2006, 4:45 pm

Khawn is kinda pronounced like john but with a K and thx

Reply Black Collar, April 3rd, 2013, 11:40 pm

At times, you can tell if you will like a comic or not. I think I'll really like this one!

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