Chapter 1 Page 3
25 Aug 2006 02:49 pm
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User's Comments:jhames34, 25 Aug 2006 04:04 pmthe first two pages were nice, the fire was really well done...some of the bodies and postures of the characters are a bit unnatural...keep at it, the third panel has a lot going for it Jenlee, 29 Aug 2007 06:42 pm
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