Chapter 1 Page 3

August 25th, 2006, 2:49 pm

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Reply jhames34, August 25th, 2006, 4:04 pm

the first two pages were nice, the fire was really well done...some of the bodies and postures of the characters are a bit unnatural...keep at it, the third panel has a lot going for it

Reply Jenlee, August 29th, 2007, 6:42 pm

>.< i cna't stop looking at that red eye lol when i try and look around the pannel it automatically goes back to the red eye lol such a huuuge distraction

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