The 3rd

Chapter 1 Page 6

August 26th, 2006, 5:34 am

Author's Comments:

Reply tRickityHouses, August 26th, 2006, 5:36 am

I know. The captain guy looks weird as hell.

Reply Advertisement, May 26th, 2018, 12:26 pm

Reply tRickityHouses, March 31st, 2018, 4:12 am

OK this page changed a bit when I updated.

I removed like 50% of the dialogue and spiced it up a bit. I HATED the huge text bubbles/wall I had before. It's so much more readable.

I also gave the country a name.

User's Comments:

Reply Sam4books, June 10th, 2007, 7:07 am

Yay strategy presentation thingy ^^

Reply Kevin (Guest), December 22nd, 2011, 5:24 pm

its actually really interesting~ i know im just at the first 6 pages of the first chapter, but for a comic i feel like its a littl too much of text. but besides that i like it a lot :)

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